The TOC and cover page were very good the class had no changes. The spread needed some improvements like, change the color of the title and quote but it kinda got lost. also on the second page of the spread move the quote to a place better to read.

Hair magazine

I choose the TOC that has the hair across the spread. Everyone else really likes this TOC too. They did have some improvements to add to it like, change the color of the numbers so I changed them to yellow, put in the word “content” so I moved bold to the top and changed the color to pink and added content to the place where bold was and had it in white.

5 TOC 5 sprends *

comments made on my poster

• flip the image around so people are reading left to right not right to left
• take out the spacing in the layout of my words
• keep the words in the bright area of the poster

ring final posters

I choose 3 of my favorite posters out of 10. I focused more on the images than the text. made sure everything lined up and was on one side. tried not to center my text bc I tended to do that. I couldn’t choose only two posters so I’m going to print these 3 and choose 2 from that. I had fun creating these posters.

ring final posters

Trying to go more abstracted like using shapes or photos of my rings. The hard part of me is trying to figure out where to put the logo after I created the poster.

Posters for my rings

final titles

I got feedback to connect the “O” in both words making an 8. also testing out the fonts with that adjustment. another feedback was to change the oval shape to more of a circle instead. I ajusted the logos and it looks really good in my opinion.

I really like this assignment and the piece I picked which is “Rings”, I’m really enjoying taking pictures of the rings. My titles for the object is okay wish they were better having a hard time coming up with a title. what I have is diamonds, round, design, exception, and fashion.